Thursday, December 28, 2006

Glorious Tangles Comments

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He signed it with anonomous.
She took it with but little fuss.
He moved in closer hopes up high.
She slowly told him with a sigh,
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Jonzo Bandwagoner 29 December 2006

sweet mother of science this was good! Wow. Ok, I'm going back to read it again. Ok, I'm done again. WOW. The 'tangles' line is genius... you communicated what I feel most of the time in one poem, which is what great poetry is supposed to do. The use of the third person is also creative. Whooahaow. -bandwagoner

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