Wednesday, October 31, 2012

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The sun shines behind Mountains,
washing over us, a fountain,
a great comfort and source of hope,
from the loving One who cuts the ropes.
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Soren Valentine
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Alla Simone 02 November 2012

You've revealed the lie I've lived for a while, and I'd rather die, than see It's twisted smile. You've healed my wounds and stayed the poison, you rose new moons despite what I've chosen. Those are my favorite lines. The title is expertly chosen and an overall great poem. As usual, your words draw the reader in smoothly.

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