Sunday, September 4, 2005

Glorious Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

Glorious Girl
With the huge smile,
The friendly hug,
The gentle shoulder to cry on,
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Ivy Christou
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Duncan Wyllie 02 February 2006

I'd Just like to say that Uriah's comment was a brilliant discription for this. Very Honest Ah! the complexities of life and personalities. As you can see thought provoking as well Love Duncan

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Uriah Hamilton 26 January 2006

Fate can knock you down, but try to land on love and dreams.

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Indiscreet Episode 11 November 2005

This is my favorite! Yet again, Fate, has a talent for destroying all. You've done a great job of pulling back veils and confronting inner weakness and truth.

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Max Reif 12 September 2005

nice work, Ivy, a really honest look in the mirror, a realistic inspiration!

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Seán O' Muiriosa 07 September 2005

Fantastic Ivy. I love the thread of hope that runs through this entire poem and the ending emphasises this much more, very impressive work!

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