Glorious Girl
With the huge smile,
The friendly hug,
The gentle shoulder to cry on,
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Fate can knock you down, but try to land on love and dreams.
This is my favorite! Yet again, Fate, has a talent for destroying all. You've done a great job of pulling back veils and confronting inner weakness and truth.
nice work, Ivy, a really honest look in the mirror, a realistic inspiration!
Fantastic Ivy. I love the thread of hope that runs through this entire poem and the ending emphasises this much more, very impressive work!
I'd Just like to say that Uriah's comment was a brilliant discription for this. Very Honest Ah! the complexities of life and personalities. As you can see thought provoking as well Love Duncan