Thursday, May 21, 2009

Gloomy Verse Comments

Rating: 3.7

1.0 Alone

Alone and alone – you are alone
We are with you – you are alone
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Ashraful Musaddeq
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Darren Jkoeryo 22 January 2019

Lovely poem on loneliness.

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Aijaz Asif 04 June 2009

Alone and alone – you are alone We are with you – you are alone Sun and moon – like you alone O my beloved – poet you alone..... this one I can relate to myself or it is, I think so, : p....another beautiful and powerful write, in few lines the whole purpose of loneliness is defined and u did it very masterfully, in my thinking 'alone and alone' and 'One-way love' both are the same coz in both conditions you feel alone....thanks many 10'sssssssssssssssssss rgds asif

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Surya . 03 June 2009

sharp and crisp in conveying an idead, .beautifull. posted 10 love surya

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

One-way love always confined How can you tell so many things in so few words? I have to learn it from you.Luv - Brishti

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Lady Grace 03 June 2009

aaalways to be alone is a sacrifice..grace

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Antonio Liao 03 June 2009

yah! many things can't be seen but fell it in our heart...you unlock the wisdom of harmony and the courage to see...beyond the eye..wonder in the poem that touch the unseen of the heart...as the soul tremendously salute....your existence... makes us believed that you are one of its kind...a poet of today thank you....

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Smiley Hooker 03 June 2009

very sentimental poem. but you'll never be alone with your kind poetry. like the sun and the moon, readers' heart will delightedly shine on you by the touch of your poetry. keep my smile: -)

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Obed Souza 02 June 2009

The heart of the lonely is full of missing people! 10!

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 June 2009

Yes it is true...scarlet dream alwqays walks like an ant...very good allegories used....10+++

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Alison Cassidy 30 May 2009

Thoughtful somber verse with a charcoal truth. Reminds me of Eeyore. 'And how are you today, Eeyore? ' said Pooh brightly. 'Not very how'. said Eeyore gloomily. 'I haven't felt at all how now for a long time.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Alison Cassidy 30 May 2009

Thoughtful somber verse with a charcoal truth. Reminds me of Eeyore. 'And how are you today, Eeeyore? ' said Pooh brightly. 'Not very how'. said Eeyore gloomily. 'I haven't felt at all how now for a long time.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Martine Kolber 30 May 2009

Well written! A 10, nothing more to say! Take care, Martine

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Ency Bearis 30 May 2009

true to verses...gloomy being alone..well presented...

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Lady Grace 30 May 2009

it's a very hard to be alone..grace

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moon and sun is alone. it is the fate of man who is abandoned by his beloved. nice. shan

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Sherif Monem 28 May 2009

Nice sentimental poem. If you change the title of the poem to be more cheerful. Thanks

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Sandra Fowler 27 May 2009

In my part of the world we might believe this poem was created on a lowering day. Gray clouds everywhere. But your moodiness works for you. Excellent write. Warm regards, Sandra

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Anjali Sinha 26 May 2009

Alone alone naaaaa Im not alone I know you are there with me I know you are there for support and love So I wont worry wowwwwwwwwww a lovely poem dear Ashraf a tenner from meeeeeeeeeeee anjuuuuuu

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Shashendra Amalshan 26 May 2009

I feel alone before I came to this site...but I m feeling okay now..but when we keep looking at the past..always feels bad though 10++

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all words true...1.0 alone is very touching..!

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