Gloomy Verse Comments

Lovely poem on loneliness.

Alone and alone – you are alone We are with you – you are alone Sun and moon – like you alone O my beloved – poet you alone..... this one I can relate to myself or it is, I think so, : p....another beautiful and powerful write, in few lines the whole purpose of loneliness is defined and u did it very masterfully, in my thinking 'alone and alone' and 'One-way love' both are the same coz in both conditions you feel alone....thanks many 10'sssssssssssssssssss rgds asif

sharp and crisp in conveying an idead, .beautifull. posted 10 love surya

One-way love always confined How can you tell so many things in so few words? I have to learn it from you.Luv - Brishti

aaalways to be alone is a sacrifice..grace

yah! many things can't be seen but fell it in our heart...you unlock the wisdom of harmony and the courage to see...beyond the eye..wonder in the poem that touch the unseen of the heart...as the soul tremendously salute....your existence... makes us believed that you are one of its kind...a poet of today thank you....

very sentimental poem. but you'll never be alone with your kind poetry. like the sun and the moon, readers' heart will delightedly shine on you by the touch of your poetry. keep my smile: -)

The heart of the lonely is full of missing people! 10!

Yes it is true...scarlet dream alwqays walks like an ant...very good allegories used....10+++

Thoughtful somber verse with a charcoal truth. Reminds me of Eeyore. 'And how are you today, Eeyore? ' said Pooh brightly. 'Not very how'. said Eeyore gloomily. 'I haven't felt at all how now for a long time.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Thoughtful somber verse with a charcoal truth. Reminds me of Eeyore. 'And how are you today, Eeeyore? ' said Pooh brightly. 'Not very how'. said Eeyore gloomily. 'I haven't felt at all how now for a long time.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Well written! A 10, nothing more to say! Take care, Martine

true to verses...gloomy being alone..well presented...

it's a very hard to be alone..grace

moon and sun is alone. it is the fate of man who is abandoned by his beloved. nice. shan

Nice sentimental poem. If you change the title of the poem to be more cheerful. Thanks

In my part of the world we might believe this poem was created on a lowering day. Gray clouds everywhere. But your moodiness works for you. Excellent write. Warm regards, Sandra

Alone alone naaaaa Im not alone I know you are there with me I know you are there for support and love So I wont worry wowwwwwwwwww a lovely poem dear Ashraf a tenner from meeeeeeeeeeee anjuuuuuu

I feel alone before I came to this site...but I m feeling okay now..but when we keep looking at the past..always feels bad though 10++

all words true...1.0 alone is very touching..!