Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Gloomy Moonlight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Day is fading away; the night is getting close;
Wind is turning cold; the fog falls surround.
Into my heart I feel an ice cube,
Instead my mind burns.
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allan macli borges
fog
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 March 2009

very romantic and touchy! keep writing!

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Aiswarya. T.anish 04 October 2008

All night long she rides the sky; Spreading her light, nice lines

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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 October 2008

'When the day is back, She fall asleep so sad; And now she’s dreaming of us. I know she’s dreaming of us.' A nice lovely poem.10+

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