there I saw
the lurking pain,
sadness and anger
in the words
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a beautiful poem reflect a deep feeling and vision in you..well done..10++++
first, i would say 'thanks' for the response you made i like the flow of deliberation from my lines to your words.. all words written in your poem gives inspiration for me to write makes my day filled with joy it makes my unkind heart smile..grace
a classic poets pandering...throes of disillusionment and despair nicely written cheers
Interesting piece......you have captured your readers with your soft and gloomy mood.............10+++
'alas! why are you weeping or wailing, asif for not being discovered' Asif, I am feeling gloomy, successful write! 10+++
it is grief in the heart which is never cured, never tend ........there comes an awful end......beautiful writer and sorrowfyl end... goo d write... i enjoy sharing the poem