Gloom Implicit. Comments

Haunted. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

We feel that the present happenings in the world portend some imminent doom! Man lives in fear and this underlying fear makes him anxious and disturbed....! It is believed that animals and birds have an extra sensory power to foresee such mishaps! Indeed a great write that makes one's mind a little agitated.....! Let us believe that prayers can render all evil forces powerless....! Full marks!

The gloomy winter sun is never gloom somewhere, it just there because winter has clouded the real image. There is no static wrinkles on the ocean, just moving lines of turbulence waves No matter how angry sky and storm to the ground it wont break the ground into two parts As soon as time clear, winter will learn how to be spring again Great idea of you to write this

pls consider, its ash colored, not old.