Tuesday, March 29, 2005

Gloom Glorified Comments

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I train my eyes
Looking above once again
A repetitive motion
Of a worry
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Renee Lewis
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Jodi Right 30 March 2005

Thats is beautiful, i really like how your title is used continuously and your ryming patterns also the story of that theres a protector with you that helps you and guides you is a great insight to how people are always lookign for a gaurdian angel.

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