Gloom Descends On My Heart! Comments

You are wonderful at writing poetry! Continue in eloquence and grace!

Another stunning poem! Thank you for this beautifully crafted piece of tragic insight!

Your poem is exactly like the picture posted.Full marks Mam.

Gloom descends on my heart I cant ever see a fresh start A fog of depression around Pushing me lower to the ground The fragrance that is specially you- -. so much of pain expressed. the desire to love and feel the nearness of the loved one. depths of gloom....... pain. conquer yourself and your dark thoughts. thankyou tony

This life hides so much of pain. At unexpected moments, it descends down and enslaves our heart. However hard we try to wrest ourselves free, the ropes tighten around our neck strangulating and drowning us into the depths of gloom. If we learn to divert our mind into some pleasurable activities, we can experience relief and to a great extent conquer our dark thoughts! Very poignantly presented!

Wowwww. Wonderful. I can feel your pain n gloom. Every line of this poem touches the heart's depths. And a smooth, even flow of words makes it such a great read. Loved it.10 many many times.

[...]Not finding you near me Breaks me apart slowly As tear roll down My senses drown Gloom descends on my heart[...] Brilliant and relatable lines Arzoo.. A very fine poem.. Thank you for sharing.10/10

You are just an illusion My nerves are in confusion My heart mourns & is silent Soul grieving hear its lament.......whole poem was beautiful...but these lines were wow......Wonderfully narrated as usual.....thank you for sharing :)

A fog of depression! But, not with too much drink; hoping to wake up and to be stronger once again. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A very nice penned piece explaining sadly love and yearning it. I liked it. Thank you for sharing, Aarzoo.

A life without love, a body without soul and a mind without thought - - - - - You clubbed all in one pack - Awesome poem....Loved it, Aarzooji.....10++++