Thursday, February 24, 2022

Gloom Comments

Rating: 5.0

An umbrella studded with bloom
Hung over the night's eternal gloom
Large did its ominousness loom
Over the moon that flew with a ‘vroom'.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Rebecca Navarre 01 March 2022

Ah, Wonderfully created! .. An umbrella with bloom that hung over the nights eternal gloom! .. Beautifully painted! .. So movingly expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

My heart goes to you Becca for the good words.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 February 2022

Excellent poem both in content and rhyme.......10

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 February 2022

Thank you, Geeta. Obliged.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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