heart awes by humanistic stream divine
as rocking across universe and evolution
man and matter resound in own volition eclectic
through ages and eons above as redounding
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it was worth reading because of the last line.being a Christian 'let the love and peace be sole motto our intention' is my 'philosophy' too though we may beg to differ in other ways. john o'connell
Doctor, your work has an lineal connectedness to the great Allen Ginsberg, which in high regard is a mighty compliment.
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
earth converges upon to a simple global village drawing nearer and nearer to neighboring close we conquer time and distance by science and space let the love and peace be sole motto our intention...very honest desire and evrybody should strive hard to make it success... lovely imagination..i liked the idea....10 read mine message....welcome.... message
Such verses should belong to a great poet like you. A man owns great soul, we all are from the same mankind and we should treat each other in accordance with humanly values. mature poetry.
Just a word - WOW! ! ! ! May the peace and love be with us. Thanks for sharing it.. It's worth to ponder on.
thought provoking! beautiful wording! finger towards truths! 10+
let the love and peace be sole motto our intention ............................................................................... Subhendu, pleasantly for me your kind plan .... 10 x10 Best wishes, Tsira
A great write with much truth. I like the last stanza-the world is a village.
I largely agree with my friend Carl….. However I would like to point out a flaw in the clubbing of Asian poets… From India we also have our revered Dr Reshma Ramesh.. a master of short poetry…and we even have a gentleman who has invented ONEREYU… single word poems… we cud debate that separately. Look at vidi, mamta, indira There are top poets in asia who write very concise and crisp poetry… Coming to this poem…yes a bit drawn out (I too am a culprit there) yet nice read…and has a definite theme Keep it up dr cheers
You have brought me back in time and take me to ponder on about what we are now............Great written poem 10++++++++++++ Thanks!
As seems to be the habit with many Indian and other poets of Asia, this interesting poem is a long one, ten four line verses. It tends to ramble a bit, as all such long poems usually do, and in doing so, the impact of the words tend to be lost along the way. Were this poem expressed in five or six verses, I think it would have been more effective. Still, it was an interesting and scholarly read but one lacking in emotion, a crucial element of all poetry. It certainly was not a bad poem, but I couldn't help feeling that it seemed more like a scholarly dissertation on an obscure subject and not a plea to draw attention to your subject. That lack of emotion sapped the power of your words in this poem, Dr. Kar.
a wonderful, powerful poem, i feel the sadness in it's background..this is a new account to let me be able to comment..wishing you are doing better dear friend
Friend, this was very powerful and remarkable poem! Absolutely amazing! well-penned throughout! Strong words great write! You get a 10 from me!
My dear friend, this is a very powerful and well-penned, sending a straight message, brilliant, you got my 10+ vote, Love and Peace, Romeo
the global village is vast we ourselves basically live in it...brings us together but also creates new opportunities for terrible things....racism and injustice.....it can sow lies and grow fears......brilliant write.... thought evoking :)
earth converges upon to a simple global village drawing nearer and nearer to neighboring close we conquer time and distance by science and space let the love and peace be sole motto our intention ...very philosophical...hoping the existing racism transforms into love for each other.....10
'' An important aspect of Kierkegaard’s philosophy in this matter was his distinction between objective truths, which included the correspondence between facts and beliefs, and subjective truths, which include our passionate commitment to ideas and beliefs.'' It is an excellent existentialistic philosophical poem.The existentialistic ideas of this great poem have made an original and decisive contribution to aesthetic thinking Thank you for sharing, Subhendu. 10+++++++++ from Mari.
‘…voluptuous are our way of thinking hedonistic…’ In consumerist society it’s the magic mantra…and ads lure and conjure with out poring salivation of us…global village is clichéd...now can we think of global villa…? a grat leap forward But it mustn’t be lip-service-sermon…great thought 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK