..Global Peace Theory / Afzal Shauq Comments

a great message to the world let peace prevail

this is a very beautiful poem

great poem, very important message to the world

My having seen the flagged; 'Crescent & Star, ' along side your name, I assumed that you are or were birthed in Turkey. The birthplace of my parental families for over 500 years. I was born in the USA. I find it most difficult to agree with your poem whereas the lines generalize, after the relatively few had destroyed mostly all that were upon Earth. There would NOT be a 'web net' to have read your Global Peace Theory, nor any other efforts to end war or describe their un-victorious murderous battles. On the contrary; I will agree to disagree with your writing; > > 'We don't have the right to be named as human beings. Rather, we are brutal animals like vultures and crocodiles' No other creature forms Armies, fleshless wings to dropp WMDs. I speak in their defense. All other life, have their Earthly 'Right; to exist, I say, Compare 'Humans to Humans and then describe Evil as Evil with no other comparison that's not nearly viable. Earth hath no remorse for it's environmental terror nor does it discriminate. Nature will reflect the abuse brought upon it when disturbed. Likened the currant un-stopping of her ocean internal fossil wastes, un-disturbed for eons of time. Pollution is of another consequential problem. When relating to predators, then, I agree. WE as ungrateful animals, are the most treacherous and wasteful creatures on Earth 'The World is a terrible and dangerous place, not because of the Evil, but because of the people who do nothing about it' -Albert Einstein You also reference the biblical version of Human Creation, as Children of Adam what of all the other 'Life', Plant and our Mother Earth? As for 'Smile' being a Weapon (Metaphor) for Peace? I like to think about it as an 'Emotion' solely for happiness. Unless felt by individuals whom are of evil inherent character. Rather we interpret 'Inhumanity' and deal with the Evil 'Minorities' of the entire Earth nation populace. My own written endeavors are metaphoric solutions that translate for Peace having, Love, Empathy and Compassion prevail over flawed, religious and political tyrany. God is not he God is not she God is 'We' -Buddhism 'All things that have 'Self' are Godly' -Swami Satchidenanda (spell?) Universal Temple, NYC 1960 Thank you for sharing, Inspirational work ...louie levy 07.08.2010

10+ A great poem with deep compassion for the humanity! ...... humanity is burnt to dust? .....We don’t have the right to be named as human beings....like vultures and crocodiles! .......sing melodiously with the collective actions. YOUR WORDS ARE SIMPLY A HIGH-IMPACT FORCE that would certainly impact the human consciousness. I salute you for being so human! Thanks for inviting. No wonder you have 6 printed books to your credit, I will love to read them if I can lay my hands to them.Thanks

out standing expressions....powerful punch....a thoughtful one..each word itself brings out the truth...! ! ! ! love this poem....

It is my fervert belief that the things that seperate us as humans as you mentioned in your poem, 'greed', 'race' are all social constructs, 'book of norms'. If we really look deep inside oursleves it is same blood that runs in our viens. If we can realise this then peace will no longer be a figment of our imagination- very thoughful poetry, which demands self reflection.

Love this poem. An excellent bit of truth in it.

Thanks for sharing such an important poem

this is veryy true and powerfull meaning i love this poem not just because it saying wat is wat but it is actual reality love it!

i love it! ! ...............10! !

i love it! ! .....10! !

An evocative write, a global appeal for seamless coexistence!

A powerful poem with a powerful mesage addressing all human beings without exception. All we need is to spot the evil part of us in order to reach global PEACE. voted.

This is poetry at its very best! ! ! Outstanding write, filled with absolute truths. What a wonderful world this would be if we actually 'did' behave as human beings. Your poem is very meaningful, with a powerful message. Loved every single line! 10+++++

awesome ya and great task 10/10

A poem in declarative style. Straight and powerful and withoug failing to give the much needed food for thought. I wrote few poems aspiring Indo-Pak friendship like New Road, Rossette etc. I liked this poem immensely.

an awe inspiring poem, realistic and relevant to the current world that is being divided into pieces..... this is really nice, thanks for sharing

This is a beautiful poem; a plea for the future of our world; peace is possible inspite of all our differences which makes for a wonderful world; in this the season of Him who brings peace to our souls; May you be blessed and continue sharing with us your gift of poetry for a long long time.

peace is not the best thing if we did not have chaos then we would probably not have hope and we would not as close together and we would not learn what life has set for us so sorry but completely peace is a stupider idea stupider then fighting over a toothbrush! sorry!