Thursday, April 9, 2015

Glittering Countenance Comments

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Translation of ghazal
Began to glitter that enchanting face
And eyes bent down to bow before
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Suhail Kakorvi
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Enjoyed this...Your choice to employ a Couplet format works well...Just curious why you began the work with a Tercet? It doesn't take away from the poem, I was just curious, is all....Fine Work ~FjR~

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