Friday, November 14, 2008

Glitter Comments

Rating: 0.0

there is glitter everywhere,
even in sally's hair,
what are we to do?
the glitter is all over you.
...
Read full text

jasmin bell
COMMENTS
Afzal Shauq 07 November 2009

we can't wash it off. we can't brush it off. what are we to do? the glitter is all over you. very well..you know how to write good poems..really appreciate your work and this poem too..10/10

0 0 Reply
Tobias Caldicott 01 July 2009

sally is a bit original but this poem has something that makes you take note and is another sweet, breif peice well done

0 0 Reply

this poem makes me think of pink and cute.. i like this piece krista

0 0 Reply

This made me smile. Great poem!

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success