Sunday, December 17, 2017

Glistening Drops Comments

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The peacock is dancing
and the clouds are approaching
Rain is pouring in the heart
and it look very smart
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Rini Shibu
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Robert Murray Smith 24 April 2018

A beautifully crafted write full of rich images. This is what we should all aim for in our poetry.+++10 Robert

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Rebecca Navarre 23 December 2017

:) heh, Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rebecca Navarre 23 December 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! Filled With Such Incredible Beauty! ! ! ! ! ! And Heart! ! ! ! ! Ever So Breath Taking! ! ! ! ! Love This! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !

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Rini Shibu 25 December 2017

Thanks for visiting this poem Rebecca

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 December 2017

Part 4 In Ramayanam, when Rama came out successful in the test by breaking the bow, Maithily mayilpeda pole santosham poondaal. The reason for her happiness is the same: she is now assured of a best set of genes to endow her children with! Nice poem. A wonderful Hundred for this one! -unnikrishnan

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Rini Shibu 19 December 2017

Thank you so much Unnikrishnan for your feedback.. I was nice to read

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 December 2017

Part 3 This is the very principle of natural selection, which Charles Darwin spoke of. Mazhakkar vaanlerumbol Mayiladunnu kauthukaal', because that is the breeding season for the species. Unlike human beings, most other animal species have their specific season for breeding.- the season best suited for the young ones to grow up; with least threat from predators and with abundance of food. -conts as part 4............

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 December 2017

part 2 In most human communities too, there is tradition of show-off in the form dance. Among the aborigine communities, it is the male who dance. In the so called civilized world, (which is male chauvinistic) the females/women dance to show off before the men, to attract them. The purpose is the same: each individual gets a chance to select the owner of the best set of genes for transferring to the next generation. -contd as part 3

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Lamar Cole 17 December 2017

This is a very beautiful and enjoyable poem.

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Rini Shibu 18 December 2017

Thanks for your comment Lam.. Rini

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 December 2017

A beautiful love in the rain. An amazing write that captures the beauty of nature and wonders of love.10

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Rini Shibu 18 December 2017

Thanks Rose for your encouraging words..

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