Glimpses Of Simplicity And Innocence Comments

A wonderful write....liked it dear madam.5 stars and to my favorite.

Coseuences of a broken family are too ugly.

So insightful and so touching is this piece.....Valsa........simplicity exposed to mockery and bitterness..... so beautifully scripted with touching words....I am speechless...10/10

A feminist aggressiveness is seen here.Quite natural.I like this poem with inner tone.

A sad tale of two stories told with complete details. Unfortunately more mouths to be fed only adds to the burden and sorrow of this very emotional write. When society and its treatment of young women and the under privileged is changed then life will be better indeed. An inspiring write Valsa!

An episode extracted from our own surroundings narrated with intensity of concern and overshadowing helplessness. We have regret with her limitations and Mr Kanniappan, she is not that mentally retarded...

Society still needs to change where young innocent females are pressurised into early marriage.

Nice poem! She must be a mentally retarded woman, victim of innocence!

Beautiful poem again from you..The two different shades you have portrayed beautifully..The first one, drunkard husband, with many mouths to feed, struggling woman... Second one, Innocent Victim, before she understand what is life, life has taken away her innocence.. Loved reading it.

Great write. Happenings in society are brought to attention in a simple way. Facts of life must be tackled. Thank you.

The First one is a harsh fact Mam, where women having drunkard husbands struggle in their life as their husbands give them nothing but more mouths to be fed! The Second one is a real innocence expressed by the young girl unaware of the cruel fact! a gud write Mam.

of different shades but tied somewhere, the two verses ink tales of sadness!

Beautiful poems portraying the sentiments justifying the title. Second one is wonderfully inked. Thanks for sharing.