Friday, December 18, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***glimpse S Of Love***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.7

heart needs love to sway for swing by grin
as dream engrosses upon for gleams of love,
yet it riffles for colors to paint art of rainbow
trodden path of joy and sorrow yet oscillates
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Dr subhendu kar
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 25 January 2010

What a lovely poem! You started out with a glimpse of love but took a longer look verses after verse until the last one. a 10++++>>>>>>

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Rinki Nandy 05 January 2010

am yet to come across a poet who can put words together so beautifully, passionately writte and it makes the reader's heart and mind work together. gr8 write.

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Rinki Nandy 05 January 2010

am yet to come across a poet who can put words together so beautifully, passionate and it makes the reader's brain and the heart work together. gr8 write.

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Sheena Aguilar 01 January 2010

a nice piece.Thanks for sharing

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Fay Slimm 30 December 2009

Lovely poem - - and very apt title as the verse is full of love....10 Fay

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Melissia Ann Senter 26 December 2009

beautiful, and wonderfully exspressed my friend thanks for sharing with me Melissia Ann

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 December 2009

La gala of imageries… fluffs touching soul…brings tranquility in turmoil… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Marieta Maglas 21 December 2009

wonderful cognitive metaphor: as dream engrosses upon for gleams of love and excellent metaphorical poem, belonging to lyrism 10++++++++++

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passionated poem, extremly expressed well.. heart ruffles for luscious glow of ocean by resurrection into resonance of redness lest jingle may ramble from mango grove to etch rhythm in each speckle of blood. desire covertly slither on lips of kisses mirth croons in joy to float speechless as frills of spumes reels across the gloss quest seems to peek into room of repose

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Afzal Shauq 20 December 2009

desire covertly slither on lips of kisses mirth croons in joy to float speechless as frills of spumes reels across the gloss quest seems to peek into room of repose what a sweet stanza of rich poem..love your way of writing..well done 10/10

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Christina Phan 20 December 2009

great way to express the glimpse of love about someone else you its lovely n so beautiful fanastic job 10+++

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Lynn Glover 20 December 2009

Why Dr. Kar I seem to get the feeling you are expressing your love to the one you love in this poem. Very tender and touching. A good write Your friend Lynn A 10

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Mahsa Almeida 20 December 2009

great poem...i enjoyed every word.

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Love leaps to limitless life and light. Excellently expressed my friend.

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Carol Gall 18 December 2009

you could write poems for lovers i think you write from your heart thats why this poem is so beautiful 10

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Tsira Goge 18 December 2009

horizon silhouettes in midst of solitude when silence whispers over rune of hue passion seems to call on scarlet of gleam resilience of love opens its door to heaven ................................................................... Very beautifully, subhendu..10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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