there is a magic
in the way you walked
along a whispering green road
it resonates in your sweet smiles
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bravo, bravo....very beautiful and smooth writing brother with nice flow and heart filling words...this is what love is, when one feels filled and complete and without it, you feel like that voyager who is lost in the barren desert and yearning for just a dropp of water....thanks for sharing this wonderful work with me, many, many 10'sssssss rgds asif
Your beloved one is truly a very lucky one, Ahmad.Pure beauty and sheer emotion in your dedication. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. A.
as usual........stunning! ! ! ! ! ! hey guys......shiddiqi is on the top! !
make my life worthwhile you are alive in my life you inspires me to continue to live, to love, to beautify love ------ Awesome love poem written...the best of all dedicated poems. So heartfelt and most realistic one! ! ! 10+++++
love poems come in a flow and i see that flow of emotion and words in sync with them...
nothing like to be in love to love life, very well expressed definitivly there are some feeling in it.GREAT
when a person writes about love, it comes from their heart ono a blank piece of paper, and carries the reader to a far away land. this is what you have done. excellent write! teeeeen
aw. this si touching.. it touched me..... nice.
A lovely tribute to a beautiful lady well done Ahmad regards Alf
everyone should know this truth: 'you finds your soul then you finally realizes that love is not a vanished dream but a thing that dwells forever' true love lives forever....
wonderful cognitive metaphor: ''make my life worthwhile you are alive in my life you inspires me to continue to live, to love, to beautify love'' an excellent idea...10 +++ from me
A beautifully crafted piece serving as your tribute to your beloved one.
A loving, passionate write and beautiful tribute to a loved one. Very well crafted with a smooth flow and great imagery. Thank you for sharing :)
I like how you used beautiful, natural things in life. You compare one thing to many. Nature surrounds your poem to describe how you feel. You open up many visions, just to get a 'glimpse'. Nicely written. Deborah Cromer
'glimpse of love' penned beautifully! ..........wide range vision.......fine! 10+
The poem that speaks of the true love coming from the bottom of the heart.
A real good tribute to your loved one. Tks Nooruddeen