Friday, July 10, 2009

Glimpse Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

there is a magic
in the way you walked
along a whispering green road
it resonates in your sweet smiles
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Nooruddeen Mm 09 October 2009

A real good tribute to your loved one. Tks Nooruddeen

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Aijaz Asif 29 July 2009

bravo, bravo....very beautiful and smooth writing brother with nice flow and heart filling words...this is what love is, when one feels filled and complete and without it, you feel like that voyager who is lost in the barren desert and yearning for just a dropp of water....thanks for sharing this wonderful work with me, many, many 10'sssssss rgds asif

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Cheung Shun Sang 27 July 2009

You got a joyful one. Very well-you must happy

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Sadiqullah Khan 23 July 2009

fine imagery, Well written.10

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Seema Chowdhury 13 July 2009

nice tribute to a good friend.

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Yelena M. 11 July 2009

Your beloved one is truly a very lucky one, Ahmad.Pure beauty and sheer emotion in your dedication. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. A.

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Omar Ibrahim 11 July 2009

as usual........stunning! ! ! ! ! ! hey guys......shiddiqi is on the top! !

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Catrina Heart 11 July 2009

make my life worthwhile you are alive in my life you inspires me to continue to live, to love, to beautify love ------ Awesome love poem written...the best of all dedicated poems. So heartfelt and most realistic one! ! ! 10+++++

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Indira Babbellapati 11 July 2009

love poems come in a flow and i see that flow of emotion and words in sync with them...

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Juan Carlos Abeti 10 July 2009

nothing like to be in love to love life, very well expressed definitivly there are some feeling in it.GREAT

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Louis Rams 10 July 2009

when a person writes about love, it comes from their heart ono a blank piece of paper, and carries the reader to a far away land. this is what you have done. excellent write! teeeeen

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aw. this si touching.. it touched me..... nice.

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Alf Hutchison 10 July 2009

A lovely tribute to a beautiful lady well done Ahmad regards Alf

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Allan Macli Borges 10 July 2009

everyone should know this truth: 'you finds your soul then you finally realizes that love is not a vanished dream but a thing that dwells forever' true love lives forever....

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Marieta Maglas 10 July 2009

wonderful cognitive metaphor: ''make my life worthwhile you are alive in my life you inspires me to continue to live, to love, to beautify love'' an excellent idea...10 +++ from me

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Obinna Eruchie 10 July 2009

A beautifully crafted piece serving as your tribute to your beloved one.

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Duh Huh 10 July 2009

A loving, passionate write and beautiful tribute to a loved one. Very well crafted with a smooth flow and great imagery. Thank you for sharing :)

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Deborah Cromer 10 July 2009

I like how you used beautiful, natural things in life. You compare one thing to many. Nature surrounds your poem to describe how you feel. You open up many visions, just to get a 'glimpse'. Nicely written. Deborah Cromer

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 July 2009

'glimpse of love' penned beautifully! ..........wide range vision.......fine! 10+

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Rajaram Ramachandran 10 July 2009

The poem that speaks of the true love coming from the bottom of the heart.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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