love kisses the smiles
when ripples in the dream
yet not real but seemingly true
as the flower blooms blue.
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Looked for (genufection) ...no can find...but will comment on what I did read... Dream a love of wonderful...passions anbd emotion...over time...you wake..to find out how real the dream...I lke the way you spoke of that feeling...I still feel what you have wrote....thank you.
What I like about this poem is the way you have used words with the long vowel sounds. Such assonance produces a dreamy, sleepy, sensuous feeling to the poem. I liked it very much.
it is wonderful sir! ! thanks a lot for recommending it to me.