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i'm not going to say what i felt. that was awesome! xx

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love the structure of this poem a very elegant sensual piece of poetry excellent work

wooooo...mate you did a long one there...lovely As he nursed the last 'glass clinging' dregs loaded, beautiful! so well placed loved it :)

It was a hard reading. Very hard. How do you create such? ? ? ? But altogether it was a good reading.

Don't do it Red! ! ....Aherm.....I need to read this one at home. You have the kind of imagination that girls like me admire Stevie; ^) Great writing...a flirty giggle in every line x