Thursday, February 24, 2011

Glimpse Comments

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A glimpse...
... too close a second, yet it lingers...
... I wonder why
...
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Walter Sanson Lotilla
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Jazib Kamalvi 25 August 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Walter. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Ency Bearis 04 November 2011

Such a wonderful concepts with that inquistive thoughts and a nice observation and true we wonder why what's behind and appreciate that smile for it has so many reason to interprete. Great intriguing poem.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 October 2011

amazing poem i like the part when you say 'i wonder why' it is because significant things and beauty strike you at a glimpse if they do not strike, they are insignificant we often wonder how these things happen but if we try harder we can't find the right words we only just credit it to fate. beautifully written especially with all the ellipsis, they add drama to your poem

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Walter Sanson Lotilla

Walter Sanson Lotilla

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