Tuesday, June 7, 2016

Gleanings From The Cutting Room Floor Liquids Comments

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PART ONE MEDICAL EMERGENCIES

ACIDS
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Tom Billsborough
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Susan Williams 08 June 2016

I love puns! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You can pun with the best- -I started snickering on line #1, sniggering on line #2, chuckling on line #3, giggling like a mad scientist by line #4, totally sold by line #5. You are now my official go-to poet for having a little pun! ! ! snicker snicker

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Tom Billsborough 08 June 2016

I'll have to have a go with those alcoholic ones but I've just had tequila and I'm feeling a bit rum. or I should say rumingly. Oh, well, back to the drawing board, he said yawningly. Oh no, it's that Wes's fault. can't rid of it.. well, not systematically. No way... Thanks Tom

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Pamela Sinicrope 07 June 2016

OMG...you are so hilarious! Love this! I wanted to write something witty in response, but I'm too busy laughing to think.

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Tom Billsborough 07 June 2016

oh, knowing you, yo'll think of something. I got mixed up a bit with that Garden of Eden. I thought Barry had written one but I read your comments and you said your poem arose from a discussion, not one of his poems. Anyway I found one of his called Gaia and it was very good indeed. So nothing lost there! I'm not sure how much scope I have with liquids. i know when Wes was trying to make me guess about what he was driving at, he said bodily Fluids. Think I'll ignore that, thinking back to yesterday at the Pub and all those lovely liquors. Like aladdin's cave. I had a Dizzy Blonde beer, cool real cool! Must be potential for fun there. Have a go yourself! Many thanks Tom

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