GLEAMS OF DELIGHT
stance seems to revel by voices whispering
yet eyes meanders into window on world
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Great job! Thank you for painting such a beautiful picture with the stroke of Your words.
your word play paints a vivid image to me. Well done my friend
A vista of colours and breathtaking visuals has just opened up before my eyes when I read this... the last paragraph in particular makes me tearful in a good way. Powerful, yet softly beautiful piece... almost dreamy in some aspects ie. in the use of words to conjure up the images.
You can tell you didnt just slop this poem together. you definitely put a lot of time and thinking into this poem. Great job! !
I must say, it is not only a poem on nature... to me... it's a canvas.. :)
A nice poem that ebbs and flows... ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon dune of sands as raveled respires deep as tide and ebb echo across crest and trough like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth
The last line is the real stamp of the poem. Life is like this. It is a continuous flow. We have to accept the truth. Well done.
I like the third stanza. Ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon Dune of sands as raveled respires deep, As tide and ebb acho across crest and trough Like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth. A beautiful poem about nature. Have a nice day. B.B.
Delightful reading.... connection of soul and nature Deep rooted thoughts Ultimately results gleams of delight.. Thank you for sharing..10+
My goodness- this is a delightful poem with vivid images that makes nature glow- thanks for sharing. a 10
Normally it is hard for me to get into a poem that is not rymed or metered, however, this poem was easy to enjoy and kept me interested throughout it's entirety. Thanks for the invite, well worth it.
rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth...like a human earth desire to live more...dr. kar's true love for environment enlivens his thoughts and ideology...regards lovita j r morang
Subhendu - the English Language must smile with delight every time you write a poem! I know of no-one who delights more visibly in each beautifully-turned phrase. Thank you for sharing your delight. Mary
'ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon dune of sands as raveled respires deep as tide and ebb echo across crest and trough like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth' Beautiful imagery Dr Subhendu, through out your poem. I loved above quoted lines particularly.
Good. Packed with nice imagery and meaningful thoughts conveyed. I really enjoyed the gleams of delight you expressed here. Thank you for sharing. Gautam.
'like rain in summer elightens thirsty earht'. a breathtaking poem with a metaphysical truth. i am beginning to hate this business of a 10 for a poem. i would not give Shakespeare a 10 either. just eternal praise. john
i finally got a chance to read one of your poems....... gleams of delight...... and i must admit that it is very good and it got me to think. nice read tnx. samantha