Thursday, February 11, 2010

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ****gleams Of Delight*****! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.7

GLEAMS OF DELIGHT

stance seems to revel by voices whispering
yet eyes meanders into window on world
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Dr subhendu kar
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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 March 2010

i finally got a chance to read one of your poems....... gleams of delight...... and i must admit that it is very good and it got me to think. nice read tnx. samantha

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ALee1971 *** 23 March 2010

Great job! Thank you for painting such a beautiful picture with the stroke of Your words.

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G. L. Fletcher 22 March 2010

your word play paints a vivid image to me. Well done my friend

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Iris Rain 16 March 2010

A vista of colours and breathtaking visuals has just opened up before my eyes when I read this... the last paragraph in particular makes me tearful in a good way. Powerful, yet softly beautiful piece... almost dreamy in some aspects ie. in the use of words to conjure up the images.

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BrittanyXD S 16 March 2010

You can tell you didnt just slop this poem together. you definitely put a lot of time and thinking into this poem. Great job! !

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Sumita Datta 11 March 2010

I must say, it is not only a poem on nature... to me... it's a canvas.. :)

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Orville Phillips 10 March 2010

A nice poem that ebbs and flows... ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon dune of sands as raveled respires deep as tide and ebb echo across crest and trough like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth

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Ravi A 10 March 2010

The last line is the real stamp of the poem. Life is like this. It is a continuous flow. We have to accept the truth. Well done.

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Andrew Smallwood 09 March 2010

Real Nice poem. Very deep thinking!

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Anonymous Butterfly 09 March 2010

I like the third stanza. Ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon Dune of sands as raveled respires deep, As tide and ebb acho across crest and trough Like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth. A beautiful poem about nature. Have a nice day. B.B.

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Abhinav Baruah 05 March 2010

Delightful reading.... connection of soul and nature Deep rooted thoughts Ultimately results gleams of delight.. Thank you for sharing..10+

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 04 March 2010

My goodness- this is a delightful poem with vivid images that makes nature glow- thanks for sharing. a 10

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Michelle Kafka 03 March 2010

An enjoyment to read. Thanks for sharing.

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Casey Geiger 01 March 2010

Normally it is hard for me to get into a poem that is not rymed or metered, however, this poem was easy to enjoy and kept me interested throughout it's entirety. Thanks for the invite, well worth it.

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Lovita Morang 01 March 2010

rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth...like a human earth desire to live more...dr. kar's true love for environment enlivens his thoughts and ideology...regards lovita j r morang

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Dr.subhendu Kar 27 February 2010

Subhendu - the English Language must smile with delight every time you write a poem! I know of no-one who delights more visibly in each beautifully-turned phrase. Thank you for sharing your delight. Mary

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Rehana Nazli 25 February 2010

'ocean raves up by glimmering tunes of moon dune of sands as raveled respires deep as tide and ebb echo across crest and trough like rain in summer enlightens thirsty earth' Beautiful imagery Dr Subhendu, through out your poem. I loved above quoted lines particularly.

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Gautam Sen 22 February 2010

Good. Packed with nice imagery and meaningful thoughts conveyed. I really enjoyed the gleams of delight you expressed here. Thank you for sharing. Gautam.

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John Oconnell 22 February 2010

'like rain in summer elightens thirsty earht'. a breathtaking poem with a metaphysical truth. i am beginning to hate this business of a 10 for a poem. i would not give Shakespeare a 10 either. just eternal praise. john

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Skye Mckay 22 February 2010

beautifuly writen its got deep meaning. i love it 10++++

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Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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