Monday, July 14, 2008

Gleaming Towards Something Comments

Rating: 4.0

standing when you are sitting is wrong
walking when your running is giving up
talking when you are silent is saddening
inhaling and exhaling is breathing life
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August de Leon
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Delilah Miller 14 July 2008

Hey, I loved it and the contradiction made perfect sense every time you strummed it. Delilah

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Marvin Brato 14 July 2008

Nice piece of meditation in poetic expression! High marks.

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