Gleam Of Hope Comments

the tranquil gleam, brightening my soul and my mind.. then the thunder and storm.. on the thirsty earth, the mercy of clouds was poured.. drowned in the reminiscences i sat …tears, ….the beautiful prismatic sky, I left myself in the hands of creativity... Brushing the present scene.. very great imagination. your brilliance of thought You have a fascinating mind………. Thank you dear poetess. for this poem. Tony

well written. continue the good work.

IMAGERY is the seed of creativity in poetry and u have plenty

@Jaya Das, Nice imagery drawn in the poem. At the end, a gleam of hope prevails. 'I left myself in the hands of creativity...., The rains of past have fallen...... I took my brush to paint the present scene' - The poem has ended wonderfully with these beautiful lines.

Hope and optimism are very essential parts of our life which can drive away all negative thoughts and failures. Destiny has its role and we can't the way things are happening. few minutes past....my tears dried up, .not a single bead was left to shed....... The birds calling me out to start a new journey ahead,

Another stunning piece. Your words reach out and Involve the reader. I felt your sorrow and was pleased at the outcome of a new beginning. Beautiful 10

A nicely written and poignant poem, Jaya. Thanks

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. However, it's whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning. Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned in good poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Jaya. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

This is a beautiful poem, I could feel that surge of sadness, that sobbing that rakes your body and the strange peaceful numbness that follows. Thank you for sharing.