Sunday, July 7, 2013

Glass Tomb Comments

Rating: 4.3

I awoke as darkness
gave the night a kiss,
a reluctant goodbye
to yield the blue sky.
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Ferdinand L Quintos
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Khairul Ahsan 13 July 2013

The wilting flower and the falling petals are a joyless world’s portent.....very nice analogy. As I gazed at the vase, it became as a tomb, all ready to embrace my love you only doomed. Aha! The doomed love! Dear poet, by the way, May I be excused if I dare say: With a love so tender... Without the a would be better?

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Ferdinand L Quintos

Ferdinand L Quintos

Bayambang, Pangasinan, Philippines
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