The wilting flower and the falling petals are a joyless world’s portent.....very nice analogy.
As I gazed at the vase,
it became as a tomb,
all ready to embrace
my love you only doomed.
Aha! The doomed love!
Dear poet, by the way,
May I be excused if I dare say:
With a love so tender...
Without the a would be better?
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The wilting flower and the falling petals are a joyless world’s portent.....very nice analogy. As I gazed at the vase, it became as a tomb, all ready to embrace my love you only doomed. Aha! The doomed love! Dear poet, by the way, May I be excused if I dare say: With a love so tender... Without the a would be better?