Monday, October 20, 2008

.glass Of Whiskey And A Cigarette Comments

Rating: 2.5

I wake up in the morning
Disoriented, in a daze
Know not if still dreaming
Confused, in a maze
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Anand Dixit
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Fred Babbin 01 February 2010

I like your use of the words that have the sound of rushing, and the repetition of the sound in the rhyming. You really get the message across.

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Reshma Ramesh 20 October 2008

haha! well penned........you will get it anyway....

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