Thursday, September 15, 2016

Glass Of Water (Limerick & Senryu) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Limerick

Half full is the glass to the optimist
Half empty is the glass to the pessimist
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COMMENTS
Kim Barney 19 September 2016

Well done. Now add a sonnet with the same theme! Ha! Just kidding. Where is that glass of water anyway? I'm thirsty.

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Spock The Vegan 25 September 2016

Thanks. Sonnets are too much trouble. Half a glass might be just right for a half wit like you. (kidding)

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Mihaela Pirjol 16 September 2016

I like the way how the same theme, is beautifully incorporated in two poetical structures. Well done.

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Spock The Vegan 16 September 2016

Thank you Mihaela. I wasn't sure the senryu would be understood, so I wrote the limerick afterwards.

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