I saw a mother breastfeeding,
She had love in her body
But glass in her eyes.
As if this food giving ritual
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I agree with mary, excellent observation on one young mother and child, A good lesson in parenting. Tai
Very interesting image...... the glass in the eye ~ interesting. You've done a wonderful job painting a dismal picture of this woman and her situation. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary
Wonderful. Perfect form and content.