Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Glass Idol Comments

Rating: 4.5

With tender whispers I disclosed my soul
From all others, I made him my first love.

With eyes of love, a new world...Behold!
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Luz H.
COMMENTS
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 May 2021

A lovely poem in which you expess superbly. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'A recount.. of pandemic lockdowns worldwide

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 January 2021

God's Blessings in Abundance for you. I repeat here again: you are my oldest friend (in period not in age) in Poetry! I am very happy to 'meet' you again now.5 Stars! And to My Favourites.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 January 2021

2) Truly, this poem has already become an Immortal Poem. You have brought Light to Poem Hunter's brandnew Home page, dear Luz, the site got its brandnew beautiful face on the 24 Dec 2020

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 January 2021

I am very proud of you, dear Luz that you are chosen as TMPOTD thrice. How it was chosen, I don't know either, but after having been chosen Thrice, I reagrd this as an Immortal Poem

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Chinedu Dike 28 March 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Luz.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 March 2020

I lived, I loved, I cried... But when at last, the Glass Idol was gone I thanked The Lord for a heart like mine. my bleeding heart..... very very nice poem dear Luz. thank u. and congratulations.

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Luz Hanaii 30 March 2020

Thank you dear Tony.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 March 2020

A wonderful poem with words woven cleverly to make interesting reading. 'My love was pure, yet not returned, My bleeding heart..., his infidelity... I never thought I would survive, The pain, the tears, my Ecstasy! ' is so beautiful. Congrats.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 March 2020

Excellent piece of work! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being selected as Poem of the Day! Top score

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 March 2020

2) Your words in this brilliant poem, are written so touching and yet most beautifully rendered. God was with you when you wrote this, I am sure, dearest poetess! CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen or the THIRD time. THRICE today (2020) and in 2018 and in 2019. A true fantastic: I lived, I loved, I cried... But when at last, the Glass Idol was gone I thanked The Lord for a heart like mine.............Most beautiful words as the concluding lines, a 10 Full Score!

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Luz Hanaii 30 March 2020

Dear Sylvia, thank you for mentioning it. If it wasn't for you I would not even know since I still don't know how to use the site well or where do these notices appear? I don't always get notices? and nobody sent me a notice to my box about this. Well, I'm happy to find that out. Thanks for looking out for me dear friend. God bless you always. Your friend Luz.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 March 2020

My dearest Luz, one of my oldest friend (not in age, but in time) from PF era and now since 2011 on PH. How touching is that, I wanted also to keep my poems together like you and that's why we came to be in PH. Truly a wonderful poem site worldwide! You have been chosen twice (2018 and 2019) before and TODAY it is the third time, so THRICE, dearest Luz! Really amazing. This poem is truly fantastic and powerfully worded. The words

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 March 2020

There is ecstatic love for the beauty of the heart///congrats for being selected this beautiful poem as POD

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Luz Hanaii 30 March 2020

Mahtab, Thank you. I didn't even know until my dear friend sent me an e-mail. Blessings to you.

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Lyn Paul 28 March 2020

Heartache we think we will never recover. We eventually do and learn so much from this. Thank you and here is to strength, health and happiness.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 March 2020

Congrats! Already read and commented this lovely poem.

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Pallab Chaudhury 28 March 2020

The fine sand-sculpture Which I’ve built- liquefied; Lonely beach- ahead! Many congratulations for the very nice POD!

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Jankovic Zoran 17 December 2019

Great... All of us who have experienced this know that it can only happen once. The strongest feelings were when love turned into pain. When all is gone, we are left with a scar on the knee of a soul he is reluctant to remember.

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Luz Hanaii 18 December 2019

I was too young and he was my husband. He was abusive so it ended in a painful divorce. Thank you for your very receptive comment.

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Tamara Beryl Latham 10 December 2019

Great job, Luz and congratulations on POD. Sorry I'm late, but I was having a problem with posting. I love the title and its relationship to the verse. : -)

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Luz Hanaii 14 December 2019

Tamara, thank you for commenting. I know what you mean, this site gives me trouble sometimes. tfs

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Luz Hanaii 12 April 2019

THANK YOU TO POEM HUNTER TEAM FOR SELECTING THIS POEM AS POD.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 March 2019

With eyes of love! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 March 2019

A wonderful poem that touches the heart. Poignant yet beautiful. Well crafted write.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 March 2019

Keep creating, dear poetess. TWICE chosen as the Member Poem Of The Day. WOW! Last year exactly on the same date and today. These honours you most deserved, Luz! Like you I did not know for a very long time HOW this poem site works. At the present time, I can manage it very well. After PF was no more, I did my best to submit my poems here. The premier time I submitted was in 2011, but truly active had I become in 2017.- SFC.

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Luz Hanaii 12 April 2019

Dear Sylvia, Believe or not I still don't know all about this place. I don't know who or how I was chosen? I just got notices in my computer and came here and found out through peoples comments. Oh Well! That's nice and I'm grateful for any recognition. You said I was chosen last year? Hmm! I wasn't even aware, you know more than I do. But thanks for mentioning it. Big Hug!

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