Friday, June 27, 2014

Glass Heart Comments

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I always seem to wear my heart on my slive.
I ware a jackite to try and cover it but it still shows.
Beating loud and powerful. In hopes to one day share this heart.
Giveing it away would be easy. But giveing it to someone I trust
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Rodney R. Cooper
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Kirti Sharma 27 June 2014

good start! nice poem... :)

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Colleen Courtney 27 June 2014

I really like this little poem. It's very honest and written from the heart. And I love the analogy of the heart being like glass. Easy to break. Very nice!

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