Thursday, December 3, 2015

Glass Floor Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Life of this world is on the glass floor
And we all keep looking at the reflection
Of self in it and presume we are not
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M. Asim Nehal
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Hazel Durham 03 December 2015

A brilliant observation on life, as we want so much for ourselves, even our reflection has to be perfect, but we need to think of becoming better people to embrace our family and friends and to give is the greatest gift of all!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2015

Just another piece to use; but, with care. Nice work.

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Shakil Ahmed 03 December 2015

yes we all keep looking at the glass floor to see our own reflection, nice thoughts, beautifully penned, well done great poet., thanks for sharing

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Mihaela Pirjol 03 December 2015

I am reminded of a saying, while reading your poem: [[ Be the change you want to see in the world. ]] by Mohandas Gandhi. Your poem evokes clearly the same wisdom. A great write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2015

Yes, yes we observe wonderful reflection on this glass floor to see beautiful things. Very amazing sharing done definitely...10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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