Monday, November 9, 2009

Glass Eye! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Skinny Dipping, and Flirting 'n
Thrills by candlelight?
Public displays of affection?
Well, I suppose it sounds alright!
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Margo Posh
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hehe. haha.. whoa.. this is not only good poetry. but awesome poem.. i love this.

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Patti Masterman 09 November 2009

I see this poem attracted the two resident weirdos: me and David Scott, lol. This is sure entertaining. And not so far from the truth nowdays. There's so many devices available to change your looks, you could literally spend an entire day getting ready to go out somewhere for a special occasion (but then it'd be bedtime which would require a whole new set of aids, lol) . loved every word.(smile)

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Penney Cooper 09 November 2009

very good! like the twist at the end. entertaining and cheeky :)

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David Scott 09 November 2009

Hey Margo, great poem. I got one about Glass Teeth. A few more 'glass' poets and we can make an entire glass skull.

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