Tuesday, September 6, 2011
Glass Comments
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the windows are all broken
and the wind is coming threw
do you feel the wind in your bones
does it turn your mind to blue
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Stefanie Fontker
02 October 2011
Wow, very beautiful. A very abstract piece, I had to reread this a few times, but I do love a challenge. You have a great talent, please, continue to write.
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7/29/2025 8:40:36 AM # 1.0.0
Well written poem, I loved the first stanza it has a nice rhyme that flows perfectly,10++++