Thursday, May 14, 2009

Glass Comments

Rating: 5.0

She broke the glass,
She and her wicked teeth broke it,
Her gums did not bleed while
She swallowed the chips.
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rosalinda flores martinez
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Eyan Desir 30 June 2009

Interesting piece Rosalinda

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 May 2009

'But after a while, She burped, Her black, heart Out.' Rosalinda, I added 10 to this short cute poem.

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Afzal Shauq 15 May 2009

a sweet and heart feeling poem...liked it very much... hope you like my poems too..you got 10 of 10 points as you seem to me a good poet indeed...

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