Friday, October 2, 2020

Glance At Sunlight Comments

Rating: 4.8

The stream glides down gurgling
Listen to its sweet refrain
Put down smothering blues brewing
Cast away all throttling pain
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Valsa George
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Budhashaya Behera 30 October 2020

Sunlight's glaNce is symbol of devotion. I love thisbeauty andfeel it looks like Lord's dress. Much devotion grows. This poem is lovely one1 Hail To our LORD!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 October 2020

Look at life and keep smiling Grab the little joys the mind can contain Dismiss all defeatist thoughts surfacing Wait for the fresh day about to begin I loved this verse immensely for the sheer positive vibration it creates like the bright rays of dawn........Thank you Valsa.......5 Stars

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Suresh Kumar Ek 09 October 2020

Motivating poem Thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2020

Bright side of life is well executed through sunrise. Here I cite...Look at life and keep smiling / Grab the little joys the mind can contain / Dismiss all defeatist thoughts surfacing / Wait for the fresh day about to begin. A nice dedication with attractive graphic. Five stars.

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Cast away all throttling pain Wait for the fresh day about to begin......top star

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2020

Wow so well thought, to grab little happiness like kids running behind the butterflies...Relieve self from small worries like chimney leaving the smoke. A profound and inspiring poem.10****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 October 2020

What a beautiful poem. Each and every line truly uplifts the soul. Words that could propel us to look at life and keep smiling. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Five Stars! ! To my Poem List.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 October 2020

Sun is smiling to serve for universe as per natural laws in selfless mood. We are also smiling seeing this tender sun as reflected in this cover photo. Stream of rays interestingly glide down to touch heart and soul. An excellent poem is well penned..5 stars..

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Indira Renganathan 02 October 2020

Some people can enjoy nature and be light hearted....some people can easily put away all worries and struggles aside and can look forward to a brighter tomorrow....but exceptionally some get drowned in sombre moods not knowing to get out of it...you have very well helped such people by this poem of yours....well composed and greatly admirable Valsa....full mark

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 October 2020

Let the sun rise from the opposite side of life ocean Let the sun light come and shine the life graciously Let the sunny ray of dawn hug the inside heart of love where you live lonely Let the sunlight be friend when no one wants to be give accompany Let the life of loneliness be spiritual when sun always offers new day to live be grateful be grateful to the sunlight of the hopeful everyday

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 October 2020

A well authored poem. Truly inspiring...5 stars*****

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Kostas Lagos 02 October 2020

An optimistic point of view. Well written!

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Khairul Ahsan 02 October 2020

What a beautiful poem with a beautiful graphic! Your poems are always a joy to read and think about. This too is highly inspirational, makes a cloudy day sunny! 'Look at life and keep smiling Grab the little joys the mind can contain Dismiss all defeatist thoughts surfacing Wait for the fresh day about to begin' - so uplifting lines! Thank you Valsa! The poem gets full credit from me- 5*****

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Varsha M 02 October 2020

Very hopeful poem ma'am abandoning all that was called yesterday and donning the new day. Thank-you ma'am

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