Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Glamorous Sin Comments

Rating: 5.0

The world of glamor
Is the world
Where all appear
Attractive and shining
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V P Mahur
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Nika Mcguin 05 March 2014

I agree with Barbara, the imagery here was excellent. I also enjoyed the oxymoron usage here and the usage of form to draw in the reader. Well done! ~Nika

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Barbara Nixon 05 March 2014

Great poem, amazing descriptive lines and imagery.. There is a hidden hound, with the sharp teeth of a merciless kindness, brilliant imagery.10+

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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