Gladness Comments

THE HOME WHERE NO ONE IS GREATER SAME THE CLOTHES, SAME HOME, SAME BEDROOM AND WE WILL BE TOGETHER FRIEND AM GLAD I WAS A HUMAN AND MET YOU.... The manifesto of running generation should be so for the Global-village today. And the poet should be honoured for composing such universal slogan for the human society....Thank you very much. Write more....more....live long... Regards, pranab 10+

Not bad at all, really like your style of writing, the way you tell a story, and the fluent creativity in your expression. Particularly, the way you dont always rhyme each sentence, gives the poem some clarity; on that, where you could've improved would've to include some structure and/or beat to the poem, by either rhyming, or by following a rhythmic pattern. Otherwise, great effort.

i love the way you have written it. you title says it all. I love this line below the home where no one is greater, same clothes, same home, same bedroom, and we will be together friend, If you have time please comment and rate my poems (one voice, the world we live in, soul mate) . I would really appreciate it.