Gladiator Comments
‘I am dead.’ This echo races through my mind,
Breathing deeply I await the feelings,
The shadows of my life come forth.
As I stand beneath the entrance of the ring.
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This is a good story but it has some problems. The big one for me was the ending. It is always tempting to add a last verse. It is almost always a mistake. When I read the next to last verse, I said, what a great ending! Then I saw the last verse. Oh well. GW62
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8/2/2025 2:42:08 AM # 1.0.0
I have to say well done even though there's a few glitches here and there