there was a time when i thought i would say
those three little words to you.....
now the time has passed and all that is left
is how could i be a fool for you....
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Your words flowed really beautifully to form a very wonderful piece! The image of the heart falling as it did was a great way to show the damage lost love can do to the human heart.
I'm going to say three little words to you. Oh So Wonderful. That was very good. And i'm not just saying that. i like your style and the way your words flow so easily. It was beautiful.
So often with poetry, writers express regret in NOT saying those 'three little words.' So this was a refreshing and different perspective... well done! ! Brian