Saturday, July 29, 2006

Glad I Didn'T Say Comments

Rating: 5.0

there was a time when i thought i would say
those three little words to you.....
now the time has passed and all that is left
is how could i be a fool for you....
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Grace Hays
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Brian Dorn 12 October 2006

So often with poetry, writers express regret in NOT saying those 'three little words.' So this was a refreshing and different perspective... well done! ! Brian

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Lesa K 30 July 2006

Your words flowed really beautifully to form a very wonderful piece! The image of the heart falling as it did was a great way to show the damage lost love can do to the human heart.

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Patricia Gale 29 July 2006

A wise woman with a graceful flowing pen!

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Hannah . 29 July 2006

I'm going to say three little words to you. Oh So Wonderful. That was very good. And i'm not just saying that. i like your style and the way your words flow so easily. It was beautiful.

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Grace Hays

Grace Hays

Wichita, KS
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