Saturday, September 5, 2015

Glacier Melts Comments

Rating: 4.5

Mine is a repository, swallowing the night,
Dark brazen and like a dove’s wing
Flutter to loosen the thread of time
Glacier at Rama melts, the east ridge trek,
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Jacqueline D Allen 06 September 2015

...Of lately I knew they have little stories, Littered in boxes of wooden rooms, Still empty for the hibernation of severity...But the goose tail like sunrays depending, And sadness written on every face... Oh, these and the totality of this poem, they and the images conveyed are painted with some feelings of the past, the present, and future.

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Rajnish Manga 05 September 2015

Wonderful portrayal of a difficult terrain and an equally hard life of native people but with a unique culture. I quote from the poem: Of lately I knew they have little stories / Littered in boxes of wooden rooms /....And sadness written on every face,

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Kelly Kurt 05 September 2015

A wonderfully written poem, Sadiqullah

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