Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Gizza Job Comments

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I've had a few, but not much luck;
Started with a builder,
But the business went to the wall,
Then the lingerie factory where I worked went bust.
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Kevin Eaglesfield
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Fay Slimm 07 December 2008

So very clever - light - and I love the title too...... I've got a job for you Kev. - - write some more like this - we all think it is a hoot of a poem.......10 + + + + from Fay.

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James Mclain 03 December 2008

Sir one thing pray tell that you forgot.....what about poo the plumber....a nine and nine tenths from me..

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Lynda Robson 03 December 2008

Very clever write Kevin, laughed so much, thanks, my last job was a cook but I got into a bit of a pickle lol 10 Lynda xx

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Kevin Eaglesfield

Kevin Eaglesfield

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