Giving You All Of Me! ! ! Comments

very improved, nice tale from you, good poem

aww this almost made me cry... its so full pf passion, but then again the pain of someone who betrays you, and takes your body for advantage... love can be beautiful, but also sad... good job cj. =)

wow! i understand why you have been on here so long now. you are really good and this poem has so much meaning in it. it has the love but then in the deep theirs hurt

i got to say that is really beautiful :)

wow that is a great poem