Giving Up The Ghost Comments

I loved it. Be my friend and pen pal forever! You have writing abilities, intellectuality and strong instincts that drive your quill. :) G.

shadow people walk the length of the ceiling, a good write

Doesn't matter how you dress it up, how you are dressed up or how fancy the surroundings. True beauty cannot hide underneath soot just as filth is filth no matter how you dress it up. And ghosts of regret? Stab them until they are dead and never trust a sage. Incredible writing talent revealed in this story.

I like it, it flows beautiful and has a quick pace. I enjoyed reading it x x