Giving Up The Battle Comments

good write...liked the the way the inside intense pain expressed there...eloquent lines...10

i actually liked this one even though you didnt think it was that good, the end verse is very strong, really makes the point, this one kinda hits home, im sure a lot of people feel this way, but i hope that battle isnt the one they choose to lose

I can really feel your pain in this poem. I recommend you keep writing poetry because a lot of people can identify with what you're going through, and poems like this can give people hope and assurance that they are not the only ones. Beautiful write.

yes u have to lose but it doesnt mean u have to surrender.. come on fight i got ur back =) u can count on me friend..great poem full of emotion..bravo!