Saturday, April 15, 2017

Giving Up Comments

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Giving up
By Sharon Maria Moemise

Feeling the cold, hard steel betwixt my fingers
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Laurie Van Der Hart 29 April 2017

Very intense and effective in conveying your extreme emotion, Maria. You are very talented. I hope that you no longer feel quite as bad as your poem describes. Are you South African! I am too.

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Thank you so much for your comment, Laurie. Your comments are very encouraging.yes I'm South African, I live in the Westrand, in Randfontein. Good to know a fellow South African on this site.

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 April 2017

A new trend. Thanks.

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Maria Sharon Moemise

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