Saturday, February 7, 2015

Giving Up Comments

Rating: 0.0

You just can't change,
What does not want to change,
I've given up,
Trying to make things right,
...
Read full text

Sandra Feldman
COMMENTS
Eugene Levich 08 February 2015

Things may never be totally right, But they can also never be totally wrong, Sandra, As long as you write! Your poems give your readers Who love you Such wonderful delight!

0 0 Reply
Daniel Brick 08 February 2015

At first, I thought this poem was similar to the crisis in AWAY WE GO, but it most definitely is not. In the opening you sketch the sorry conditions of the world, you are sickened by these multiple problems and seek the relief of TEMPORARY withdrawal to renew your spirits and recharge your energy. So it is a time for personal poetry, that engages with life on the individual level of family and friendship, of pleasures and pastimes, love and desire. After all, we struggle to create a better world and a bigger space in which good people can enjoy these positive things of the heart.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success