Saturday, June 22, 2013

Giving Up Comments

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Am I getting closer
To piecing this puzzle
It was just getting harder
Harder and Harder
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Lyn Paul
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Chinedu Dike 15 March 2017

Faith keeps those that keep the faith - Mother Teresa. Lovely and inspirational. Thanks for sharing.

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Melissa Fleming 08 July 2013

I believe that this poem is beautiful! Meaning it inspired me and it made me see things clearer. Comparing giving up to a puzzle, the fact that you basically put preserver and never give up in a form of poetry is great and you did a great job! !

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 27 June 2013

Inspiring, Lyn Paul... the metaphors are superb.

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David Wood 24 June 2013

The stofy of life. A lovely metaphor.

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Valerie Dohren 22 June 2013

Great metaphor for life. Well, done Lyn.

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R.j. Wynn 22 June 2013

We are born to it, keep digging.

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