Wednesday, July 15, 2009

Giving Up Comments

Rating: 5.0

I no longer want to fight so I’m doing the one thing I said I would never do,
I’m giving in and letting you win even though I don’t really want to.
You have taken away everything in this world that’s important to me,
And if I no longer have any of that then there’s no way that I can be happy.
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Brooke Luchich
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Amelia Loe 18 October 2009

I really loved how truthful and honest this was, the emptiness that can be felt, I can relate

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Ahtivah Lawton 25 July 2009

once again you have done it.....luv it

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Megan Ewing 16 July 2009

Wow. Once again a poem I can relate too.

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Brooke Luchich

Brooke Luchich

Darwin, NT
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