Tuesday, December 23, 2008

Giving Up Comments

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My whole life stood at my feet,
And i just stomped on it;
Squishing all my hopes, my dreams,
Destroying what i had done good for.
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Amy Fifita
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Sad but very touching. New beginnings usually come when we have reached the end of our selves. Keep writing.

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Eddie Larkin 29 December 2008

An excellent piece, Amy. This one really grabbed me! ! !

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Guess what.. This is so truthful that it had my jaws on it's hinges.

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Briana Johnston 28 December 2008

Wow. This is a strong poem. I love the way you work with words.

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Amy Fifita

Amy Fifita

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